Posted by Jurassosaurus [129.138.2.172 - speare9-1-1.nmt.edu] on 31 March 2004 at 18.25.19 ZuluTime:

In Reply to: This might be fun.... posted by Gremlin on 29 March 2004 at 10.42.25 ZuluTime:

It's certainly a page turner. I like the zombie viewpoint. I never gave much thought to what the world must look like through their eyes. I take it that it helps to have blinding migraines from time to time? :)

The only other thing I can think of mentioning is that on page 7, for a brief moment, McClain becomes McCain. Hardly a big deal, and something that would, no doubt, get fixed up during the revision.